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y_phase_me
12-24-2004, 02:52 AM
my name is gweto
the man with da big cheeto
compared to ur lil needle
makin ur mom put on a one piece speedo

i got more rhymes
than uve ever seen
even after i drink
a fifth of jim beam
n still comin out clean

yallz just fucked up
in ur head
yappin bout shit
that puts me to bed

lol...that was just an outta the nowhere thing...thats not really how i write...here is sumtin i wrote the other day...tell me what u think...its a gay topic but o well...

im sorry if i told u nuttin was wrong
n it made u mad

im sorry to say
but tonite u made me sad

im sorry im not the type of guy
to say whats on my mind

im sorry my personality
is not ur kind

im sorry we got in a fight
especially ova sumti so small

im sorry to tell ya
but my hearts at a stall

i want it all
i wanna pick up the fone
n have someone to call

im sorry im so mellow
n u get so tweeked out

im sorry but this is the way i am
this is what my lifes about

so much hurt
n so much pain

so many different people
infectin my brain

starin at the mirror
i cant refrain

i wanna jump out
n go insane

but thats not the way
i run my life nemore

id rather just walk away
n gently close the door

my mind can race
faster than i can think

just close ur eyes
n itll be ova n a blink

only a few more dayz
before ur here

when u get in my arms
i just want u to feel secure

im sorry but this is
reall the way i feel

im sorry to say
but every feelin i have for u is real

AD@M_EMIN3M
12-26-2004, 05:12 PM
if you had written that in proper english it would have been better, it was ok. maybe you should write it properly and you will get some good replies otherwise i don't think you'll get many, sorry.

*Princezz*
12-26-2004, 05:46 PM
i think you should put these in the rap section
cause these aren't poetry

I'M THE BOSS
12-26-2004, 07:11 PM
well, it's interesting:)