*Princezz*
12-23-2004, 09:15 PM
Sensual
Caress me
Feel me
Touch me
Move me
With your body
I’ll make you sorry
You didn’t get more of me
Nip me
Suck me
Hold me
Rub me
With your hands
You know you’re more of a man
When you are with me
Tickle me
Lick me
Shake me
Bite me
With your teeth
Your mouth, those lips
You make me drip
Just fuck me, screw this
I'M THE BOSS
12-23-2004, 09:44 PM
HAha Shana that was good:) funny too!
I see you haven't lost ur touch since u been away for a couple days! GLad ur back!
Saintish
12-25-2004, 08:02 AM
thats wicked..keep up the good work....:)
AD@M_EMIN3M
12-26-2004, 05:13 PM
short, not a wide range of vocab, but still very good!
gni15
01-12-2005, 12:49 PM
like it ,but its short
your hot aint you baby
Holy hell that's hot. I like it. You are a very honest and expressive writer.
VessayG
01-23-2005, 07:49 AM
Shana makes the best Poems that i have read she made me cry once in her Poems.
thats how good of a writer she is.
Jon Bon Jovi
01-23-2005, 01:52 PM
Yeah thats good Shana :) Funny too..
sanely_insane
01-23-2005, 01:55 PM
it was pretty funny i like the ending
Shana makes the best Poems that i have read she made me cry once in her Poems.
thats how good of a writer she is.
This left me smoking a cigar, that's how "pleased" I am with it. Who knew good poetry would have the same effect as good sex.
*Princezz*
02-07-2005, 07:18 AM
meh chicks can still get sucked, if you know what i mean... ahem
*~Leah Bia~*
02-07-2005, 11:55 AM
I don't think he does! LOL
Shady kid
02-07-2005, 03:47 PM
:D ...good poem, those are always good things to hear a girl say when you guys are getiin it on... lol
50 years ago
02-07-2005, 09:16 PM
meh chicks can still get sucked, if you know what i mean... ahem
There's more than 5 places...lol