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Cain
12-17-2004, 02:12 AM
Lay beside me
And tell me what I've done
To push you away
Again I just want to understand you
You look into my eyes
And build up a wall
Harder than steel
I'm left here paralyzed

Lay beside me
And tell me what I want to know
Before you throw me away
Give me a chance
Before I'm left to stand alone
And the blackest heart
Scarred by the lighter's fire
That is your tongue

Poison on your lips
I'm left here paralyzed
I just wish I knew where I lay
On the nail of stone
I just wish this bed
Stoned nail
Wouldn't dig in still

Lay beside me
Tell me what I've done
You closed your heart
With a door not even you can open
I just wish I knew
So I wouldn't have to stand alone
Again just waiting for you

This poisoned tongue
You lash me with
Is unforgiving
Your eyes and heart of stone
Smash through me again
And are unforgiving too

All I want is the truth
But I'm left here to die
Within but without you
And the torture you put me through
Is unforgiving to you
Because the past leaves us unforgiven too

*Princezz*
12-17-2004, 05:03 AM
yeah i read this on shady records

awesome stuff Jon

Cain
12-17-2004, 04:25 PM
oh yeah you are on shady records aren't you? I should've guessed it was you...I don't know how other than the fact that Josh referred to you as Shana.

AD@M_EMIN3M
12-18-2004, 04:21 PM
is Shady Records another forum site? oh and that was good as well! peace out homies!

Cain
12-19-2004, 06:05 AM
yeah it is.

Cain
12-19-2004, 06:05 AM
also thanks again man.

I'M THE BOSS
12-19-2004, 01:47 PM
Well, i must say....u do keep on impressing me lol...i love reading your poems!!!
YOu and Shana have the greatest oness!!

Cain
12-20-2004, 12:31 AM
I'm honored to have a bit of a fanbase. Thank you.

AD@M_EMIN3M
12-20-2004, 06:29 PM
yes you do, i ain't in it sorry to say but you are still good!

Cain
12-21-2004, 12:42 AM
lol well either way thank you for the feedback.

goldy_c
12-21-2004, 12:37 PM
hey, thats was good man the other poems I read that you wrote were impressive too keep on keepin on ya dig ;)

AD@M_EMIN3M
12-21-2004, 02:45 PM
your welcome...