Everything about you was a lie
Everything you gave was nothing
I tried to understand the meanings
That you gave me
But I should've known
When nothing was there

I try to tell you that I loved you
Everything I gave
You took
But I received nothing in return
Not even love
and it's still unfufilled

Everything you said to me
Was a lie and is still
I try not to hold a grudge
But when you're lost
There's nothing but baggage
Tears in a vial built up
I wish you happiness on the outside
On the inside I wish for my death

I try to understand what I've done to me
Drinking away health that was barely there
I just wish I could have one chance
To hold you again
Before we died and were left
With just you and me
But everything seems so certain now
And the beauty I thought once was
Is no longer there
There eyes I fell into
Contained rocks at the bottom
And there's no way for me to float in the air

Everything's lost and uncertain
When you forsook our love
And now there nothing left for me
To remember you by
Except your betrayal
This vial of tears
And then neverending pain
From an unmendable
Shattered heart
Now that we're dead
And you're gone

:( very sad but very good

i love your poems Jon

thanks Shana. Love to hear people's opinions on my stuff.

your opinon on my work is appreciated too :P

I'm looking.

btw I have a new one you might like. Just scroll down.

IT's good, sad, but good lol
Keep 'on posting

lol.
thanks.
As for the good and sad comment, as with life. As with life entirely.

very good dog, impressive, sad as mentioned twice but very good which has alos been mentioned twice! Peace out homies!

thanks man.

no problem!