View Full Version : Nobody's There


SneakySnufflez
12-10-2004, 03:31 PM
Nobody's There

I woke up in the middle of the night to view what I feared to see
Just another lonesome night, with no one here for me
The thoughts in my mind slowly drift away
I put my head down on my pillow, waiting for the next day
My eyes are heavy, but I can’t close them tonight
Don’t wanna lie without you, so I’ll wait until mornings light

-and I wanna say-

I love you, I love you, & I want you to know
(That)
I love you, I love you, and I’ll never let you go
I love you, I love you, but do you even care?
(That)
I love you, I love you, cause when I wake up, there is nobody there…

Morning comes & I get up, strong enough to face the day
Still I wear a façade, but everything can’t be my way
I walk through my home town, wishing you were by my side
No one else compares to you, you’re the only one I can confide
Still I see past friends, and even some distinct enemies
They’re all loved up, & happy now, so why did this happen to me?

-And you’re gone, but still I say-

I love you, I love you, & I want you to know
(That)
I love you, I love you, and I’ll never let you go
I love you, I love you, but do you even care?
(That)
I love you, I love you, cause when I wake up, there is nobody there…

So as I lay me down to sleep, on this cold December night
I’ll make a wish upon that star; I’ll wish with all my might
Please send my baby back to me, why does he have to be away
Without him here, I’m lost; confused; don’t know what to say
I close my eyes & imagine I’m wrapped up in your arms
It’s not true yet I feel so safe, knowing you’ll keep me safe from harm

-And it’s not true, this fantasy, but still I have to say-

I love you, I love you, & I want you to know
(That)
I love you, I love you, and I’ll never let you go
I love you, I love you, but do you even care?
(That)
I love you, I love you, cause when I wake up, there is nobody there…

In reality, I’m alone
In my own isolated zone
Yes, in reality, nobody’s there…
In reality…nobody’s there…

AD@M_EMIN3M
12-13-2004, 06:40 PM
That was very impressive, that is probably my favourite piece of work that you have done yet!!! Does that poem actually relate to you and something in your life or did you just make it up? I think its better when it relates to something thats really happening to you but when its made up and you produce something like that its pretty impressive cause of how it all seems so real. Peace out homies!

I'M THE BOSS
12-13-2004, 08:54 PM
yeah it was good!!!! Good JOBB!!

*Princezz*
12-14-2004, 07:19 PM
i've said it before about this poem and i'll say it again

good job! i love it!

AD@M_EMIN3M
12-18-2004, 04:23 PM
how did you say it before?? this is the first time you replied to this post. Peace out homies!

rabbitgirl
04-14-2005, 03:06 PM
the silence of the darkness of my heart,
tears whats left of me apart,
when i cry no ones there to dry my tears
no one knows whats all my fears
no one cares
no one loves,no one to hold me
im tangled in a web and no one comes to set me free
im all alone in this world
and i get so mad that i hurl
my 'friends' are my enemies
y cant they stop backstabbin,i beg please
everyone acts like i dont have needs
no one sees when my heart bleeds,
for love,for someone to hold
in this world im a stranger,gazes are mean and cold
mom has her favorite,left me to die
dad said he didnt want me,i was a mistake,a lie
no one calls my home to say hello
i will never have a love,i know
loved before
will now be hurt for ever more
its just me,myself and i
no one i have to hear my cry
Eminem so lucky he got his daughter
i got nobody,i would only be lucky if my life was shorter
Marshall is all i got to make me smile
For him i would walk a mile
his posters on my wall is what keeps me goin
what keeps the blood in my veins flowin
my only inspiration to reach my dream
the only person that helps me not to break down and scream
no ones there
and never will be near