This is my first poem,
Will it kick up a stink?
It may go good,
Tell me what you think..............

that wasn't the poem, here it is v v v

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I've Been Thinking

I've Been thinking about you all night long,
So I thought I'd write you a little love song.
You're the sun, stars and moon in my eye,
I want us to be one forever til we die.
You make me smile in every single way,
I am smiling now, tomorrow and even yesterday.
I love you so much you're the light in my life,
Maybe one day you will be my wife.
Nothing can come between us especially no crew,
Cause I know you love me like I love you,
Well now i've finished my little love song,
I'll contiue thinking of you all night long.
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awe that was so cute:) and good for starterss uur gifted lol:D

thanks, i needed someone to say that to me to give me a confidence boost towards my poetry....thank you....peace out homies!