Those Thoughts

Suicidal thoughts fill my brain
The ones that live to kill
The ones that brood inside your head
Make you forget your own freewill
The thoughts that make you think that
There is nothing left for you in this life
The ones that raise the knife to your wrist
And force you to slice
The thoughts that make you want to leave
And won’t stop until you do
The thoughts that make you believe
That everything they say is true

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Do you write any other poems besides suicidial/depression poems?? Just curious because I read your poems that you post on here and it sounds like maybe you could use a psychiatrist! LOL

I have demented thoughts, and I'll be the first to admit it! But when all you do is write about ways to kill yourself, or reasons to do so, it's time to invest in some prozac!!

I hope you get some help.

I like your poetry though, you should just try to make it a bit more positive!! Don't waste such a good talent :)

'help' dosen't help

but i do have others about other things
i just don't think that they're as good

actually i just looked over my collection of poems
no i dont actually
i think i'll try to write one and post it up ;)

good poemm

lol..well its all good, usually those that are "dark" as in "deeper" are more meaningful!!! :D

Oh, I know! Trust me!
But I read all of her poems and it makes me feel so bad for her!! I just think that she should turn some of it into "less suicidal" work.
Everytime I read something else that she writes, or see her name , I think "Oh, that's the girl who wants to kill herself." <---- lol that's not good!

maybe some of you will be happy to know that I'm going to see a doctor tomorrow

What kind of doctor? Psychologist or Psychiatrist (<--- give ya drugs) ?? I hope all goes well. Sounds like ya been through a lot and if ya ever need someone to talk to....well, ya got a bunch of crazy Eminem fans!!! LOL

;)

yep i sure do lol

Yeah, hope everything goes well for you!

Hey, good poem, the last two lines were really intense

Damn that's some crazy shit. Good but completely insane.

not really a problem with insane though. I mean half my older better stuff was completely insane

what ever you do stay AWAY from anti-depresant tablets cause they are addictive and fuck you up evem more cause thats the only thing that makes you feel happy. try and write a love poem or something positive cause i wanna see if you can be just as talanted at those as you are at writing these type of pomes! Peace out homies!