View Full Version : Hi (weird title yeah lol)


SneakySnufflez
12-05-2004, 09:02 AM
Hi

Briefly spoke with you, late last Sunday night
I got nervous when I seen you; just didn’t feel right
This is how it is now; I’m nervous every time we speak
I don’t know what to expect, what will I be like when we meet?
See I’m scared sometimes; what if you don’t wanna talk?
That’s why I hesitate & wait, in case you turn round and walk
The conversation we had was alright, but was kinda strange
When you said you read the e-mail I sent you, while you were away
I took it as a joke; was weird, because I always message you
You pushed the joke aside, corrected me as you do
“I didn’t mean it like that”, wow, I didn’t know what to say
So you commented on my poem, the one about pushing me away
Sweetly, you told me I’m one of the best things you got going for you
Don’t wanna distance me further, too far already, but what to do?
I wanted to ask you how you bear it, this distance with ‘us’
It’s hard for me sometimes; I always miss you too much
I just changed the conversation, on how you don’t have a good memory
Just jokes for a little while, flipped me off, switched it on me
I said how you can’t speak to me, without putting that finger up
You laughed & said “nah”, it’s just my “dirty mind”, teasing make’s ‘us’ us
Just how we can joke with each other, in this playful way
The day the laughing stops, will be the harder days
Didn’t get a last word in; didn’t get to say good-bye
Perhaps that was a good thing, cause all I ever want are the “hi’s”

*Princezz*
12-05-2004, 06:17 PM
aw thats really good
i hope you figure this thing out with your boy

I'M THE BOSS
12-05-2004, 06:42 PM
awe....hope everythign works out with you too! :)

AD@M_EMIN3M
12-06-2004, 11:11 AM
that was great, i enjoyed reading that, but i just get one problem with your poems, dont get me wrong they are great but its just your poems dont seem to have much emotion and feelings put into them, i dont mean that in a bad way, they might do but its just when i read some others on here they seem to have emotions flying high in it and they somehow make me feel part of the situation but with your's i dont quite get that vibe.
im sorry for saying that but this is an opinionated thing where people can say what they thought so that is my opinion and you should be able to respect that!
peace out homies!