Happiness does not exist
It's hit and miss
And when I win
All that I'm in
Is nothing new
And nothing true
And nothing real
And it all steals
All joy I think
Or peace to sink
Into a world that loves me for me
And not just for my money

that was ok not great but it was OK!

hm, interesting:) lol

I liked it, you should add to it...it's kinda short. :)

THe longer the better! (As long as it's real!)

yeah, what she said is true^^^

i didn't really follow that too well...

i dont think many people will either, i aint taking the piss out of it but all im basically saying is, add to it and improve it and then it will be good!

Yeah, that poem sucks- thanks for your honesty. You guys are cool- you pay attention. I just get depressed about my failed relationships and I'm trying to figure out how to succeed.

ah, well

good luck!

you'll learn one day my friend. search on the net for advice and that? Peace out homies!