There's this stupid bitch on this message board,
always running her mouth like a fucken whore.
She thinks she's hard, she thinks she's clever
I've seen little kids give insults better.

I can't fucken stand her,
she's so immature
whining and crying-
like a little fucken girl.

I'd love to bitch slap her-
put her ass in line,
but since I can't do that
I'll guess I'll make a rhyme.

She's a fucken cunt-
sounds like she needs to get laid,
but her man won't touch her
he'd rather stick her with a blade.

I don't blame him,
and I wish he would just do it
save us all the trouble of
listening to her bullshit.

She knows who she is,
she's probably reading this right now
Crying in the corner
while I'm taking a bow! :::bows:::

:)

LOL, I just put that together as I went along, cause everywhere I go I see this bitch, and it's real fucken annoying. I just read one of her posts and she really makes me wanna scream!!! AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

"Hold me back computer, hold me back!" LOL

ahh that was pretty good, (unless it's about me haha) but i doubt it would be cause i just joined, anyway, yeah i feel that way about a lotta dumb bitches,

im a guy, i got no worries bout that, lol, nice freestyle poem

thanks, no, it's not about you!! LOL

The person who it's about knows who she is....no doubt!! LOL ;)

um... nice

i think you should come up with more creative titals for your poems though lol

Like what?? I thought that was appropriate for the poem!! LOL

yeah true

but (this is just my opinion) poetry is meant to be about deep feelings and thoughts
you shouldn't write it about some chick you met on a forum
you know what i mean? its still a good poem though

^^ lol sorry i actually said that not vessayG

she left it logged onto her account

Left it logged into her account? Are you at the same house or what?! LOL
I'm lost.

But as far as my poems, I write them in depth/detailed, or I just spit them right off the top of my head, like this one, where they don't really require a thoughtful title...
There's not much thought there, just what I was thinking at the time.

I think that if you know about poetry, you wouldn't be telling ME how to write MY poems. Everyone writes differently, and who are you to tell me how to write mine??? Just worry about yours...

I think I'm a big girl and I can handle it! Thanks :)

(not trying to be bitchy, but what would you say if I told you that?!) You should take a second....think about it.

HeYYY I APOLOGIZED TO YOU...i hope this was for that other girl...lol... bnut yeah even if i was about me lol..it was GOD DAMN GOOD lol...i liked that;)

nice lyrics and very open to your feelings, i respect and envy you now after reading those cause i cant make anything up like that, im just pure shit!

A creative way to deal with your feelings and not take them out on who you are upset with. Good job. Hey, have you checked out Eminem's "Go To Sleep" song?

i aint heard that, where can i get it from?

It's on "Cradle 2 the Grave" soundtrack. If you want the lyrics just go to google and type in Eminem and Go to Sleep. there's clips of it all over the net. It has DMX and Obie Trice on there too but mainly Eminem.

aint cradle to the grave an old film? ill have a look for it on the net but if i cant find it ill get my mate to download it off ares and put it on disk!

I don't think that I ever heard that...maybe though, ya never know.
I never know songs by title...maybe that's why I don't think that much about what I title my poems! Oh well.

Don't feel bad Adam! I'm sure there's other things that you are good at besides writing poetry!

Peace.

Whats that suppose to mean? i may have took what you said the wrong way, do you think im good at writin poetry or something? is that what you mean? I've heard the song before, when i downloaded it and it came on i knew straight away what it was, i like the song, incase you don't know what it is MrsShadyLady here's the chorus to see if you know it now;
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Now go to sleep bitch!
Die, motherfucker, die! Ugh, time's up, bitch, close ya eyes
Go to sleep, bitch! (what?)
Why are you still alive? How many times I gotta tell ya, close ya eyes?
And go to sleep bitch! (what?)
Die motherfucker die, bye, bye, motherfucker, bye, bye!
Go to sleep bitch! (what?)
Why are you still alive? Why, die motherfucker, ah, ah, ah...
...Go to sleep bitch!
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nice lyrics and very open to your feelings, i respect and envy you now after reading those cause i cant make anything up like that, im just pure shit!


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That is what I was talking about!! LOL Just playin with ya!! :)

No, I never heard that song. Hmmm......that may be the only one that I have never heard?! Where's it at?

I'm going to read some of your shit now....

your gonna read some of my poems? if you do my favourtie one is Forever And Always; I Will Love You. Download the song, i dont know where from but i'm sure you will find it, i'll take a look around for it and post it or if you want i've got it on my computer and i can send it to you if you want? i'ts up to you, just private message me and give me your e-mail if you have one.

lmaof! soo mrs shady, bet that lovely poem was for me..:) funny though! good on ya! big it up, u can spit ryhmes :) hope u had a fab xmas..

lmaof! soo mrs shady, bet that lovely poem was for me..:) funny though! good on ya! big it up, u can spit ryhmes :) hope u had a fab xmas..

Nah, don't flatter yourself!!! LOL

It WAS for Aic713, but we are cool now. When I first got on here, in every thread that I posted in we were going back and forth and I was getting really PISSED!! LOL So I figured instead of keeping it going, end it with this! LOL
Now I feel bad though, we are cool, and this is still here!!

I did have a great Christmas! I hope everyone else did too! Everyone get what they wanted?

wat up Mrs Mathers, yeah had a fab christmas, we had a bit of snow on christmas day, but all gone now .went to loadsa christmas parties, got wasted, and santa clause did not visit, think iv been an evil bitch this year lol , naaah it was all fun! no disrespect to Aic713, about the poem, i had beef with her too but we sorted now, i think iv had beef with everyone here lol for a laugh, but if u spit like that Mrs Mathers, good on ya, coz not many people can do that, my boy james spits rhymes he just flows totally, u give him a word and he will just start flowing and its real talent, thats why i liked ur poem, even though i thought was for me, i thought it was good coz the way it flowed coz if u have it girl, go for it peace out :)....

yeah, thanks, i dont rap them tho!! lol
i do in my head when i am writing some of them, but i'm just a white chick...not a rapper!! LOL
I'd feel like an ass rappin!! HAHAHAHA