Eminems the real thing.
What, jealous you cannot understand his sing.
If you can't hang with the gang, just fu--ing say his name.
politics, death, drugs, and sex.
What, yeah you heard me right.
Maybe you need to open your sight.
Em will never let you down.
He is solid, and will not drown.
Single man raising his baby.
Popularity rating so high you coul'nt touch him.
So do not flinch when you see him on a binge.
D12, fifty cent are all him see.
What he writes makes him free.
Have you heard?
Em do does not care to splurge.
Call him a prick or a whore.
Your ears must be sore.

*BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP*

wrong!

first of all, how old are you, very childish and simple rhyming and the piece dosen't flow at all

secondly, why are you writing a poem about Eminem, write a poem about something thats worth it and atleast worth the read, cause that was a waste of my time

i think that you love Em so much to write him a poem..but your style needs a little improving,
try to work on your style....i am sure you can do better! ;)

it's not bad & not good either but i like it that some one can do some shit like me, matter of fact I'm writin a song these days called "sonnet", it's dedicated to Em.
but don't worry dude juss keep goin, it doesn't really matter how good is your rhymes comparing with how deep u believe in what think of.
peace out.

agree with stand, keep postin shannon...n keep it up

God thats abit harsh Ems princezz. Shouldnt this be a place where people can write poems and not worry people are gonna say shit like that.Cos now i dont wanna post one of mine up. Anyway, Keep it up Shannon. Dont let anybody tell you otherwise. :) JadeX

that was inspirational, I'm gonna write a poem.

God thats abit harsh Ems princezz. Shouldnt this be a place where people can write poems and not worry people are gonna say shit like that.Cos now i dont wanna post one of mine up. Anyway, Keep it up Shannon. Dont let anybody tell you otherwise. :) JadeX


Lol Shana was just stating her opinion, and she doesnt really need me to write that for her, but im just saying:) And as for you posting your stuff...keep posting if you want (if you think its good) and dont let anyone stop you; cause you might have something worth wild to write!

i have no problems with people writing poems about Eminem
When the people actually have some skill
I read your other poem Jadey its was good
So don't let me put you off
I just think that this peticular poem was childish

The rhyming was like the book "the cat in the hat" and every other word that goes with "hat, rat, chat, mat, sat, bat, fat, nap, cap, dap, wap, lap, gap.." and so on lol

well, that's how we all get started u kno...sucks!!!

yeah but stan you have serious skill

like me :D lol joke

all im saying is that i dont like it! Peace out homies!