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*Princezz*
11-12-2004, 09:17 PM
While I’m Angry

I’ll fucking slit you open
While you’re sleeping
Deform you real bad
Leaving my siblings weeping

I’ll put you through a gluten
Cover you with gasoline
Light a match for you and flick it
Watch your flesh slowly burn, bit by bit

Then I’ll put you out
So my plan can continue
Don’t you dare doubt me you fucks!
There’s nothing I won’t do

By the time I’m done, you’re barely human
Just a victim of my slaughter
It just goes to show you mum and dad
You don’t fuck with this daughter

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3NCORE
11-12-2004, 09:58 PM
shiz...that crazy...nice ... sounds mean n angry as fuck lol...i like it...

Saoirse
11-13-2004, 09:04 AM
that was crazy!! :D lol
good one Shana! hope i'm not around when you are angry :p

Alicia85
11-14-2004, 11:04 AM
You definatley were angry wen u wrote that

I'M THE BOSS
11-14-2004, 12:13 PM
sounds good/powerful.....i think wehn people are angry thats when they let out the most ...and it sounded greattt!!

shannon91176
11-15-2004, 02:08 PM
I see what your saying, but your not spraying. Make sure your peorty rhymes, do not dress it like a mime.

shannon91176
11-15-2004, 02:09 PM
I see what your saying, but your not spraying. Make sure your peotry rhymes, do not dress it like a mime.

Alicia85
11-15-2004, 02:46 PM
poems dnt always have 2 rhyme

*Princezz*
11-16-2004, 06:37 AM
^^ yeah word

poetry isn't about rhyming

its about flow and feelings and they differnt ways you express them

*~Leah Bia~*
11-23-2004, 12:55 AM
It's always a bonus if you rhyme somewhat!!

Unless you have great emotion expressed...
Sounds like you may be ready for a muder spree soon!! LOL

I thought my poems were demented! ;)

AD@M_EMIN3M
12-18-2004, 08:23 PM
you are 1 crazy person! Peace out homies!