a verse i wrote about 2 or 4 years ago for a track i did with the UN (my group)

ayo i can not win,
got my head above water
but i can not swim
its like flood got me got me trapped and,
gaspin' for breath
am i, wishin' for life or just askin for death
i dont know,
sometimes i get down on myself
feels like i'm just drownin' myself
swallowin' bubbles, followin' trouble
into the dark side where the heart dies
and i try to fight the battles
take a dive into life, might doggie paddle
ridin' through these rough roads with .. no saddle,
all i wanna do is write these rhymes
but like a rolli in the trash i'm just wastin' my time
8 years, no deal and 4 groups later..
still makin' hot ass tracks with no paper,
to show for.....

am i, wishin' for life or just askin for death


i like that alot

>.> thats all u like? damn........

nah joey lol you know me i keep it simple

that was just my favourite line

i like the whole thing

well stop keeping it simple and start goin' into detail, ha ha, its all good i dont mind.......

i'll do as i please

*pokes tounge out*

i like it! Peace out homies!