Don't hate because its short, I still like this poem alot

No Expression
Lifeless Eyes
Tear Stained Cheeks
Full of Lies

Knife In Hand
I Look Away
Should I Go
Or Should I Stay

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yep yep!
It's length adds to its effect
seems blunt, to the point at first
but this could be interpreted in many many ways!
Excellente! :p

HEy its good and all...you honeslty leave a great effect on people, well i know it did on mysself...from what i've read so far from you- you seem really creative and deep!

I dont know if this makes sense or not but to me the things u say seem soo 'dark' lol its good though it gets the readers attention!

yeah i dont write happy poems

i find the dark ones to be more expressive, plus i dont really know how to write about being happy

short, blunt, yet very effective well done! Peace out homies!

yeah i dont write happy poems

i find the dark ones to be more expressive, plus i dont really know how to write about being happy


defiently know what you mean there, i write stories and shit, but its so hard for me to write happy crap!

i find it easier 2 write happier poems, must just be me and happy emotions go well together! Peace out homies!