Wrote this yesterday, so it's my newest one :p

Purgatory

You’re trapped inside a cell, no one there to help
Timing here is endless; reflect on the pain you felt
Looking back on your life, at the things you’ve done
Battles that you’ve fought, thinking that you’d won
Obviously you didn’t if this is where you ended up
So time is what you need, at your thoughts you sup
Where did you go wrong? Where’s your tribulation?
Thinking all this time, that you were living a celebration
But you’re life thread has a knot, maybe one or two
Now you are being judged, what shall they do with you?
Heaven or Hell waits, where would you rather go?
Heaven to persistent paradise, or Hell to face your foes?
All you have to do is repent, say you’re sorry for you sins
Yet that word seem so hard, because others start to grin
Why worry what they say or what their expressions do?
This is your life still you know, everything’s up to you
Or is it really, wasn’t there someone else there all along?
The guy who gave you life, think back to the Church Songs
That’s right, that’s who’s walked beside you, held your hand
You would always complain, yet he didn’t give in to your demands
He gave you freewill, true, but he isn’t there if you doubt
Trust in him & he trusts in you, you only had to shout
He’ll help you out of your misery, give you sunshine once again
All you ever had to do, was let this guy be your friend
So as you sit by yourself, thinking all this time that you fell
Look to your right & your left, who do you see sharing your cell?

fucking awesome Sneaky

Great imagery... perfect ending

I love this

YEAH IT WAS good, keep up the good work:D

*Em's Princezz* you got it in one, that was fucking awesome and the ending was perfect, well done and as xcrackheadx said, keep up the good work, there is nothing else that i can think of saying about that! peace out homies!

I wrote this on Robitussin:
LOVE EXPLAINED

Jesus was God
he was king
He created all
Then concieved in a virgin's womb
His holy spirit was born in a stable room
When alive He lived in human flesh
When His immortal blood was shed for your soul
The veil was torn and God's presence was opened to mortal man
Christ arose from the grave on the third day
His grace and faith make hope available
Christ gives His words to every person who will put their faith in Him
He will free from death and sin
Eternal life is about knowing God
Eternal life is only through Jesus Christ

I don't drink robitussin anymore. It really messed up my brain and stomach. Jesus is cool though. I think Eminem is the closest we have to Jesus in a long time- maybe since Jesus. I mean in the gospels (I read the King James) Jesus is just spitting lyrics left and right. Jesus was definitely in the media. D-12 dedicated their last album to God first . Eminem quoted Jesus when He said- Father forgive me for I know not what I do- It's in the new album at the beginning of one song. Tons of rap artists claim Jesus as their Lord and Savior and talk about it in songs. That's it.

yeah you are correct there, the poem was good but it seems like a prayer that you would say at sunday mass or something, but i still thought it was good...peace out homies!