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Shady Makaveli
10-23-2004, 09:22 PM
If you saw my thread a while back "My Cartoon" and saw "Q-boy VS Superman" in it this is more Q-boy.... Feedback will be greatly appreiciated

Pages 1 & 2
http://img14.exs.cx/img14/1639/Q-boy1Page1complete.jpg


http://img14.exs.cx/img14/3263/Q-boy1Page2complete.jpg

Shady Makaveli
10-23-2004, 09:23 PM
Pages 3 & 4
http://img14.exs.cx/img14/4531/Q-boy1Page3complete.jpg


http://img14.exs.cx/img14/4391/Q-boy1Page4colmplete.jpg

Shady Makaveli
10-23-2004, 09:26 PM
Pages 5 & 6
http://img14.exs.cx/img14/8468/Q-boy1Page5complete.jpg

http://img14.exs.cx/img14/5471/Q-boy1Page6complete.jpg

Shady Makaveli
10-23-2004, 09:28 PM
Page 7
http://img89.exs.cx/img89/5887/Q-boy1Page7complete.jpg

That's all for now thanks in advance to anyone who takes the time to read it.

*Princezz*
10-23-2004, 11:13 PM
omg ricky that is so awesome i fucking love it

its so funny

your such a good drawer!!!!

Stanatic
10-27-2004, 03:29 AM
they're really gr8....really, i like them...how long u.ve been writtin??
i think that you're kinda gifted...keep goin.

Saoirse
10-27-2004, 04:50 AM
That's Awsome!! you are very talented.........

Melly
10-27-2004, 06:09 AM
omg! i have never been so intrigued by a comic strip ever!! u have an incredible talent in drawing....the scenes were soo cleverly put out! have u thought about getting it published!? u should coz u have a talent man! i was laughing the whole way through it it was fun to read it! i love the guy holding the script for the heros to read! he was funny!
i loved it! yeah u should keep going and not give this up... if u have more i would really love to read it! im mel by the way! (shana's friend) p.s can i be in it too!!!!!!

honeypagibig
10-27-2004, 11:59 AM
y'all right his kinda gifted..the drawing was great and the story was so funny..not everybody can make a comic right?and its not boring to read.. like some comic that i've been read...im having fun while reading it and you make me laugh man..keep it up!!

"my thumbs up with you"

GoodWoman
10-27-2004, 12:20 PM
At first blush, I say the artwork is very attractive. You should be quite proud of your accomplishment!

Shady Makaveli
10-27-2004, 02:29 PM
Thanks alot everyone (especially Shana lol) Now to the questions...

infinite stan
how long u.ve been writtin??

I've never wrote anything professionally but I'be been writin' this on and off since 9th. Back then it was just stick figures lol.

Melly
omg! i have never been so intrigued by a comic strip ever!! u have an incredible talent in drawing....the scenes were soo cleverly put out! have u thought about getting it published!? u should coz u have a talent man! i was laughing the whole way through it it was fun to read it! i love the guy holding the script for the heros to read! he was funny!
i loved it! yeah u should keep going and not give this up... if u have more i would really love to read it! im mel by the way! (shana's friend) p.s can i be in it too!!!!!!

1. Yeah definately wanna get it published. Right now I'm working on a site then if it gets popular enough the big publishers will hopefully want it.

2. Oh there's certainly more it'll be on the site whenever that's up.

3. Hi Mel lol. And yeah I could put you in it.

I'M THE BOSS
10-27-2004, 03:20 PM
OMG dude thats soo funny:D holy shit im glad i was told to read this...ur an amazing drawer (is that spelled right lol?) and yeah i like when the dude is like"now who's queer" lol...yes i get amused easily lol...thats amazing...and you should do more, they're fun to read:)

PEACEE

p.s
(its like a letter lol..i like ur sig)

Riddler
10-27-2004, 04:02 PM
lol, funny, i liked page 7, lol, keep it up, post all the comics you can, if you want i can make you a sticky thread for your comics...if your intrested pm me

sweetdion
10-27-2004, 06:46 PM
lol....that was funny ....and once agian i regularly dont read comics but i took 10 min. out to read that...haha i love it!!!

the cue card thing....and jessica simpson thing was soooo funny!!
i love that comic so much!

darknessangel1
10-27-2004, 07:14 PM
its awsome, i never really liked comics but its interesting. Keep it up

crosingdalines
10-27-2004, 08:11 PM
so happy i got a message to read this
i usualli wouldn't spend this much time to read a comic or any post but i read the whole thing and laughed all the way through. consider this a big complement since i normally dont like comics and i hate "alien" other planet plots
the artwork is realli good and caught my attention imediatly

lmfao @ the jessica simpson and "Golden Glock" scene- funni shit
please post more and keep this up

>>>it was a lil hard to read cause it was to small in some areas- please make it a lil bigger next time, thanx

.....u said u had a site?- what is it?

Shady Makaveli
10-28-2004, 12:39 AM
Nah sites not up yet working on it though.

*Princezz*
10-28-2004, 01:40 AM
lol

go Sir Shady The Evil!

.M.
10-28-2004, 07:52 AM
its awesome mayne

love comic books, but this ones the shit!

keep em up man, i wanna see the next pages

Shady Makaveli
10-29-2004, 10:42 PM
Well the site basically has nothing right now but we do finally have one now and will start work on it soon (well my friend Daniel will I know jack shit about making a site). And with it I finally have a host for the cartoon Q-boy V.S. Superman! If you liked the comic and didn't get to see it, it's at the link below, just left click.

http://quintessential-comics.freenukehosting.com/Qbsm.exe

As for the comic 4 more pages have been completed, I dunno yet when or if I'll put more up from this issue here. But I'll definately continue posting previews for each issue if people want.

Shady Makaveli
10-31-2004, 09:51 PM
thread upwards

Spanish Harlem
10-31-2004, 11:42 PM
Dude Ricky you're genius.

Slackerbitch
11-03-2004, 09:49 AM
Awesome. Keep up da good work

Tia
11-04-2004, 01:07 PM
Ricky, I give it a 10/10. I remember seeing your signature before I came to this thread and thinking that's really good, I wonder if he drew that himself and then nah, he couldn't have actually drawn that...lol.

I already knew you were a great writer and just hilarious, but I didn't know you could draw quite that well. I think the art I see from you just keeps getting better and better all the time. You were really good to begin with, but now I'm amazed. Keep it up. You will definitely be published and successful, I know that for a fact.

Shady Makaveli
11-04-2004, 04:08 PM
Yeah college helped me alot with my art, especially coloring and going over my pencils. Thanks alot alot for the reply and I'll keep my fingers crossed with getting published.

xxDinoT1989xx
04-02-2005, 03:53 PM
man u get mad skillz bro.........

KingKong_90
04-02-2005, 05:31 PM
lol, i liked this alot, keep it up, ur good at it.