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Surprise! We never wanted to diss Focus again, and we really did feel bad for dissing him so hard the first time so this is a serious apology track. The whole thing is like 4:30 and it's pretty hot actually. Hope you forgive us Focus. Sorry about before.

didn't really like it, it was mean, very mean, but i did like the first one:D

okayy...

all of what i'll say is completely objective - im not condoning the content of the diss, and actually i think it's waaaaay over the line bringing his dead friend into it.....really....but yeah... objectively:

OUCH....

that intro ripped the absolute bejeebus outta that song....i seriously laughed my ass off at it....

whirly got a nice delivery & flow....ya voice is different.....takes some getting used to.....some nice lines....

hook is okay..

J ward sounds nice too....oohhh....LoL why do you have to make all the nice punches bout his dead friend??? nup...im not quoting it....

yeah....if we overlook the fact that i think you went too far....this was sick....punches were :O ....

whats the beef about anyway?

Yes, please tell. This is pretty far to go.

some personal stuff I don't wish to divulge cuz unlike most people I don't like putting too much of my personal life around on the net.

didn't yall used to be friends

some personal stuff I don't wish to divulge cuz unlike most people I don't like putting too much of my personal life around on the net.
You're kind of divulging it anyway by making it a battle on a public message board visited by hundreds of random strangers. This isn't really the discrete approach to things.

yo straight up.. beef all ya want hell i dunno even what this beef is about.. on the real though.. ferst track i'll b str8.. wuz nice.. did up nicely.. but this.. this track aint right at all...

an if its personal? how the fuck i aint know bout tha shit?.. lol

now, c'mon whirly...
you and me are fam... but for fucks sakes, if you or ya dawg think its cool to bring HIS personal stuff into disses, then at least have tha respect or courtesy to be man enough to divulge tha reasons behind tha diss, 'cos it seems even Foc doesn't fucking know
you know me, Whirly, we cool and you know what i said about getting involved in this beef, and i stick by that, but don't you think you went a little far?

sticking by ya boy in a beef, thats cool. i'd do tha same. but tha first verse (yours) was beyond that... damn man....

objectively:
Whirly: good verse on technical points, breath control not bad....
hook: weak imho
J-Ward: flow is good... some nice lines and solid on technical bits

Content was out of order - technically good.

PZ>

Don't get me wrong, Whirly, man

what i said still stands, and you still my dawg and i respect ya

but this was too far

PZ>

damn this was harsh.. on the dead friend..

whirle..your on good points on the flow delivery ect... same with j

but the disses about his dead friend is kinda over the line imo...

nice track tho not as good as the first tho...

As far as him saying "if" he has time to come back he will back in the other post . . . honestly I don't know even "if" he had the time if it's possible to come back . . . I mean Whirl and I . . . heh, we're done with this dissing even if he comes back . . . I don't think we can top these two songs without going down or sounding repetitive . . . but holy shit, lol, if ya wanna try to come back Alex . . . I seriously doubt you can, but feel free to try, lol. It's a free shot at us, we're all done, so why not.

Yea I couldn't even fucken listen to it all, that's straight fucken bullshit, whirl I adore you, and Jward too, fer real, I'm straight with both of you, but no matter how much I fucken HATED anyone, I wouldn't even fucken go there with the death of a really close frien. Michelle's my best friend in the world.....and no matter what she did to me, she could fuck me over time and time and time again, or even run her mouth about my family, I could fucken hate her, and I would NEVER EVER be heartless enough to sit there and run my mouth about ANYONE that was THAT close to her that passed away.
anyone who could actually sit there and laugh through this song is just as heartless and has no conscience.....that's straight bullshit and fucked up dude. I understand it's a battle and you gotta say shit to slam the fuck out of someone, but it's gotta be pretty uncreative to sink THAT LOW in a song.
Whirl, I really do adore you and love you to death and I love J-ward to death, so with all friendship aside.....to be honest I thought the song sucked actually, the flow wasn't that good, you guys talked too much in the beginning, and it was basically a repetition of the first diss track you made.....in just two songs, you managed to just go by the death of a close friend and his relationships, can't you think of anything else? Next time, actually take your time on a battle, instead of just busting out with another one so damn quickly.
I dunno, you could hate me for sayin this, but like I said I'm still straight with you guys, I just can't believe you were heartless enough to go this far with it. Even haters have a conscience guys.
But, eh, what can I say, I guess you guys came in here and did what was intended and basically stab the fuck out of Alex's humanity.......erm.......way to go or something.

Damn...>.>

I thought it was hot...both of them. The talking in the beginning (like Kari pointed out) was a little too much. Shorten it a little if you can...

First verse was aight...voice didnt do well with it, but it was tight...

Hook was aight. J-Ward on the hook right? Hot.

J's verse was hot...better than the first.
But to tell you the truth if I rapped just like you// I probably follow Kyle Barnes and decide to die too

^^Damn....that line was fuckin sick..

I just dont like the beat much. It was aight. Its nice for J's verse and the hook, but Whirls...I dunno...Whirl went through his verse too fast. But, overall, it was pretty fuckin sick. Enjoyed em both.

Thanks for the compliments everybody . . . even people saying we went too far is a compliment, especially if they couldn't finish listening to it lol . . . but I guess like Kari said, we have no soul or heart . . . but that's ok with me :D All the more reason to stay in this industry as far as I'm concerned, haha. I'm actually about to post songs from "The Revolution : Volume 1" that I just finished putting together. Be on the look-out . . . and since it looks as if Foc is done posting here at this board, it is time to stop mourning (or celebrating lol) this "loss" and time for us to move on ;)

well, judging by your reply, that just goes to prove Whirl's more of a man then you'll ever be.

btw whirl, thanks for the pm hun!!

Ouch . . . that stings and burns, I am nothing . . . but a bad bad person :D

now done? if ya didnt notice i have been done postin here pretty much.. fer damn near 6 months..

What a shame.

ya know what! you guys are fucken ass holes! i'm sorry man i wasn't that fond of alex either but to go that fucken low and diss shit like that and then to fucken lie to get info, yeah fuck you! alex, as far as i'm concerned you are the real man in the shit whole or a forum!! well out of these three

So this was all about J-ward's need for attention? So his mommy didn't give him enough or something? I don't get it.

Gotcha . . . next time be a little more careful of who you give info to . . . dawg for life :D . . . but the real point is . . . what are you all gonna do about it? Lol. Call me this, call me that . . . who the hell cares, I still did it, get over it. I am who I am, like it or not, and I'm gonna stand by what I say in my songs. Don't like it? Aww . . . too bad. Make track after track about me, call me whatever you want, and do whatever you want . . . but the fact of the matter is, all of you combined equal one shit from me so . . . damn, looks like there's not too much you can do about it.

That's wonderful, it's like the rest of the world cares and stuff. You should put a giant plaque on your wall to remember your achievement, since that's the only way it won't be forgotten. Sigh...

tisk.........tisk

Whirl's more of a man then you'll ever be.

J-Ward, think. No ones gonna make a track about you, since this is insignificant. You did it for attention and that proves you're an idiot. But i'm not gonna lose any sleep over it, Foc won't, no one will. So please stop trying to make yourself out as a bad boy and constantly acting as if this is tha most outrageous thing done in tha history of mankind, and we'll all be talking in 5 years, like, "remember when whats his name dissed Focus? maaaan that was harsh" 'cos we won't.

This isn't clever, you're "you all mean shit to me" is played - you're whole style and persona came and went with tha shock tactics on tha Slim Shady LP.

Just grow up a little, work on ya tracks and work on doing you, create ya own style and all, and try to be a man, dawg. 'Cos stuff like this is just... well, theres not even a word for it.

Just stop tha little act, for christs sake.

PZ>

Who are you?

Oblivion........

oblivion....

^^^^^^^^

PZ>

damn...i just listened to this..

...man...no comment..


sorry Foc' > get on aim bro.

Can't say I know ya Oblivion, sorry. Post some songs or something, maybe I'll recognize the voice.

Sup, Oblivion, hey whos this J-something guy? Oh yea, nobody...

As opposed to you . . . damn . . . what do I say back to such a huge well-known star? lol.

For somebody who doesn't matter, you guys sure do put a lot of time into continuously coming back to post, lol. Sorry you guys (and girls) but my fun is over. I made two tracks with my boy Whirl and that's that, enjoy :D This is the last time I'll be posting here . . . sorry lol. So Oblivious and T-Gay-Oral . . . sorry, but Foc has been ripped . . . ya'll aren't worth it . . . and I'm done, peace :)

Can't say I know ya Oblivion, sorry. Post some songs or something, maybe I'll recognize the voice.
^^ link should be in sig, i'm cool with Whirly and i remember one of ya songs from way back

Sup, Oblivion, hey whos this J-something guy? Oh yea, nobody...
^^ hey dawg, whats up? - lol but we all nobody atm man

For somebody who doesn't matter, you guys sure do put a lot of time into continuously coming back to post, lol. Sorry you guys (and girls) but my fun is over. I made two tracks with my boy Whirl and that's that, enjoy This is the last time I'll be posting here . . . sorry lol. So Oblivious and T-Gay-Oral . . . sorry, but Foc has been ripped . . . ya'll aren't worth it . . . and I'm done, peace
^^ you do realise that you didn't rip Foc at all? All you've done is embarrassed yaself? (in most peoples eyes on this board, and tha song was obviously made for reaction, and tha boards members represent tha public in this instance, and public opinion matters; so don't start with that "i don't care about what net heads say)

and lmao at "Oblivious" - sorry, fella, but Mentol (my dawg) called me that in tha last audio tourney on this site about a year ago, so originality is not ya strong point. Gay-Oral = crap, too *shrugs*

I'm glad ya done tho, because you're running out of stupid "dead friend jokes", and that seems to be all you can do, so its best to just stop now and hold onto that tiny fragment of self belief you have that you've either:
a) accomplished something
b) 'sonned' Focus or
c) gained notoriety

Peace, man - i just hope that something like this happens to you, where you lose a dear friend and have some arrogant prick on tha net (or real life) try to make a joke out of it.

PZ>

Peace, man - i just hope that something like this NEVER happens to you, where you lose a dear friend and have some arrogant prick on tha net (or real life) try to make a joke out of it.

PZ>

^^ i should make that clear, i made a typo and it makes what i meant to say look like tha opposite.

MY MISTAKE I WOULD NEVER WISH THAT

fucking retarded brain o' mine

PZ>

lmao^^^^^^

this is fuckin disgusting...the fact that this retard comes on here sayin shit about Focus' man..and then records a track as horrible as this..da fuck is up with your voice you whiney son of a bitch..ya quality sucks ass...your overdubs are off...you sound like that lawyer wit glasses from Darkness Falls..lmao..

You whack motherfucker..haha..man..some kids'll do anything to get themselves heard..

you're goin to hell for this shit man..lets hope you burn slowly and scream in anguish as the flesh rips of your bones and then the devil skull fucks your cranial cavity...herb.

^^^^lmfao im taking this from a prepubescent Eminem-wannabe.......awww well. I had squashed the shit a bit ago. Focus should know that I apologized for this and I disagree with what I had said. Oblivion and Kari know this as well. But I guess in between picking on girls over the internet and listening to Korn DUDE you wouldn't know that.

^^battle me...bitch aint i older than you? lol..you dont know very much:(..herb be gone!

lyrcis are aight.... ur voices sound like fags... :(