Focus . . . out of respect and love for your unmatched talent on this board, Whirlwind and I have put together something special for you. We hope you like it, and that it truly shows how much we love and respect the man and legend . . . Focus.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/xjwardxmusic.htm

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I was supposed to add a verse to this, was alittle late. Might just anyhow. Anyhow, it's good. Check it. It's some sick penmanship.

we'll discuss more about what we want to do AIM or whatever

lol cool beat... damn getting at him strongly...

ouch man..

flow is hot on both part..
delivery is hot..
the hocus pocus line is kinda lame now ...

but other than that dope shit..

Damn Whirl . . . looks like our buddy Alex didn't wanna say anything back . . . :-( . . . and we loved him so very much in our song, HAHA.

lmfao....true ima hit you up on your celly soon bruh

yeah

it was mostly nicely done... hook was original, but i don't agree with some of tha things you said

but - objectively - nice work

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I don't know about the hook, the first half of the hook was good but then it stayed at that slow pace and you said "suck" too many times IMO, but the verses were good.

lol @ the hook, the concept behind it is hillarious IMO, but ya i agree we kinda went a lil far

NOT FAR ENOUGH! hahahaha.

^^i get the feeling that you don't like focus..............he seems nice to me

lmfao :D "BE SKINNY!!!"

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ahhhhh nooooo B-Skinny . . . not cool haha, dude when you wanna get to work on another track showing our respect?

send me a beat mayne

Alex . . . I know you probably heard the song me and Whirlwind made for you . . . and honestly . . . . we feel very very bad :-( We went far . . . and personal . . . and that's why . . . . . . . . WE'RE DOING IT AGAIN! FARTHER! AND MORE PERSONAL! Look out for the new song in coming days! J-WaRd & Whirlwind

hemm!! *cough*lmfao*cough*

What's the reason for the beef?

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Alex before Whirlwind and I rip the living shit out of you and take away all respect you or anybody else may have for you as a rapper and persn . . . please come out with something back for your own damn good . . . seriously . . . this is too damn funny and wrong at the same time. I'm giving you until . . . 5:00 p.m. today to come back even if it's just a text or else your life as a rapper is over . . . well . . . either way it probably is so it doesn't really matter. Believe it or not "We Love Focus" has been topped by . . . shit we're keepin the title and song a secret until 5:00 . . . all the rest of you get ready for the Alex's rap funeral.

J-WaRd and Whirlwind

damn it! i've been waiting for a while, sene i've been at kari's!! lol

i'll give it up on this.. track done nicely.. punches by both are nice.. beat ridden fairly well by both flow kinna off in places.. good beat for a diss.. nice track.. i guess...... but bringing my dead boy in some beef i have no clue wut it is?


IF i get time i'll come back..

Alex before Whirlwind and I rip the living shit out of you and take away all respect you or anybody else may have for you as a rapper and persn . . . please come out with something back for your own damn good . . . seriously . . . this is too damn funny and wrong at the same time. I'm giving you until . . . 5:00 p.m. today to come back even if it's just a text or else your life as a rapper is over . . . well . . . either way it probably is so it doesn't really matter. Believe it or not "We Love Focus" has been topped by . . . shit we're keepin the title and song a secret until 5:00 . . . all the rest of you get ready for the Alex's rap funeral.
^^ lmao its tha internet dude

calm down

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I know haha . . . just having fun. This site's kinda lost it's edge so I just said what the hell.

I don't know this whole ordeal seems pretty emotional; from this perpective at least.

lol@whirl sounding like he sucked on helium wayyyyy too damn much**you know I luv ya**, but it was a nice flow....

This was really more about some guy named Kyle that I don't know, whats your guyss problem with him. Is it just that you have no real material to diss focus by or what?

hmm..does J-Ward live around Benson..Clayton...lol...cuz i got a safehouse very close...

This was really more about some guy named Kyle that I don't know, whats your guyss problem with him. Is it just that you have no real material to diss focus by or what?

exactly ty...

an i never really cared anyways.. even if this is 'squashed' an thats squashed only cuz devlin got in it..

cuz i didnt wanna waste my time?

Well fuck, I don't blame you. You were pretty much ignored in the song in favor of trying to beat up on a dead guy. If there was maybe one mention of kyle per emcee on the song, I could,ve respected that, I'm a no holds barred kind of emcee too, I have to be with as many mentions of my physical I catch in a battle. But The should've put kyles name in the title cause the song was pretty much directed towards him

Criticly I can't find much wrong with the flows, except j-wards over 40 white guy style, but you rock that too foke.lol

yeah, pussys apologize for there raps, it makes me not want to hear what they say next, cause they prolly wont mean it.

except j-wards over 40 white guy style, but you rock that too foke.lol

lmmfao

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